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[Pending] Character Submission - Jbolt97 - 09-05-2019
In Game Name: JBolt97
How did you find us? I have been searching for role play/lore minecraft servers that were in depth and seemed interesting. So I read up on your lore and color me intrigued.
About You: I am currently working a part time job, as well as live streaming on twitch part time. My passion is to make streaming/making videos a full time job. I also have a soft spot for the medieval age and the fantasy area.
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Jordan Drake
Age: 21
Gender: Male
APPEARANCE: He has beady brown eyes that are like two drops of chocolate. His Silky, brown hair is worn in a style that reminds you of a flame. He is on the shorter side of the scale (5'6) and he has a muscular yet skinny body. His skin is light-colored. He has high cheekbones, small ears and a rounded jaw. Most of the time, he wears a slight grin on his face. He wears a (Blue) sleeveless shirt and a ripped pair of jeans, as well as black and white sneakers. He has a tattoo on his forearm with his family's name "Drake" with a flower wrapped around it.
PERSONALITY: Jordan Drake is a friendly and faithful dude, but sometimes when pushed too far, can be outright mean. He sometimes finds himself wanting to be away from others for a certain amount of time so he can have his own personal space, where he meditates or works out. He likes to avoid any conflict due to his anxiety and just overall nervousness of the unknown.
BACKSTORY: Jordan Drake was born to the thieves Amy and Jarrod Drake. Jordan was taught from a small age that if you wanted something, you take it. His father "mentored" him to be an even better thieve that himself. By the time Jordan was 16, he had been contemplating whether or not he wanted to continue down this road. He confronted his father about this decision, but he wasn't having it. Jordan was given two options. Leave and have nothing or continue in his fathers footsteps. He made his mind to leave his family and their legacy because he didn't agree with how they dealt with things. Jordan took the essentials that he needed to survive and snuck out of his house while his parents were sleeping. He would move village to village doing odds and end jobs, ranging from farming to cleaning weapons for a local blacksmith. At age 18, he had met a girl named Ginny Taylor. Luckily, the Taylor's had brought Jordan in, and helped him get back on his feet. Jordan had made up a completely false backstory and last name, due to the meaning of drake "Serpent" He then later married Ginny 2 years later, but insisted that he kept his last name to prove that not all drakes are evil and thieves. Ginny and Jordan set off to find a place to call home. They had found a place at the village of Lindow in the forbidden lands.
CAPABILITIES:
STEALTH: Advanced
Being mentored by his father until the age of 16, Jordan has learned the art of sneaking, lock picking and stealing. Even though he knows these things, he tends to not want to do them.
SURVIVAL: Apprentice
With leaving his home at 16, he has been by himself until he was 18, so he knows a few things about surviving the wilderness.
TAILORING: Novice
Jordan may not know a lot about tailoring clothes or items, but he knows very well how to stitch up wounds.
COMBAT: Competent
Even though he is advance in the art of thievery, he has also honed his combat skills in case of if things have turned sour.
ITEMS: Jordan normally carries a small pouch of sewing needles and thread for wounds/patching up. He has a small draw string bag with extra pairs of clothes for changing. He also carries a small dagger that he stole from his father before he left home.
RE: Character Submission - Hutchy - 12-05-2019
Hello, Jbolt. I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.
I have two major points that need addressing.
Alright, first things first, I need to see more relation to the servers lore, which can be found here. Being 21, he'll have been born shortly before the Civil War ended. Make sure to make mention of these and following events in your character's backstory. Speaking of backstory, it needs to end with either your character arriving in or travelling to where the setting takes place. For ease of reference, it's a town called Nightveil.
Your backstory indicates that a second person is brought along with Jordan. I'm afraid this won't be acceptable, you can only bring one character per application, and new players can only have one character for their first few weeks.
That's all I'll give you for now, it's quite a large ask. Post again in this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue.
RE: [Pending] Character Submission - Hutchy - 16-02-2020
Trashed due to inactivity. Feel free to reapply.