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[Pending] Application - CookieMonXD - MistrJan - 17-09-2016
RE: [NEW] Application - CookieMonXD - Hutchy - 20-09-2016
Hello, Jan. Sorry for the wait, I had a lot on my plate for the past few days. Anyhow, I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.
Alright, first things first, I need to see more relation to the servers lore, which can be found here. Being 20, he'll have been born shortly before the Civil War ended. Make sure to make mention of these and following events in your character's backstory.
Also, he escapes pretty early on with no obvious, previous experience in anything helpful. For that reason, I'll have to ask that you go into further detail about how he escaped from this family.
Speaking of backstory, it needs to end with either your character arriving in or travelling to where the setting takes place. For ease of reference, it's a town called Nightveil.
Skills-wise, I'll need you to assign a 'level' to each of the skills to help me judge the realism of the character. You can find a guide to help you do that here.
I'll leave it there for now, post in this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue from there.