[Caystros]

<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><i><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><b>In Game Name (IGN): </b> </color></i>Penguenos</size><br />
<color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><i>How did you find us? (Forums, friend, previous member, etc…) </i></b> Myself via searching RP servers on google, finally stumbling upon this one</size></color><br />
<i><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b>About You: </b> </size></color></i><size option="small" style="font-size:small">I see myself as a fairly silly, but again, mature enough in situations that need maturity. I find myself confident when I'm in a crowd, not excited by many things that happen daily, but yet, I try to stay chill and cool down, seeing that's the best action I can cause when I'm with people.</size><align option="center" style="text-align: center;"><b><size option="large" style="font-size:large">CHARACTER INFORMATION</size></b></align><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Name:  </i></color></b> Caspar Wilder</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Age:   </i></color></b> Eighteen</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Gender:  </i></color></b> Male</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Appearance:  </i></color></b> Caspar is a 6'5 foot tall teenager with rather a thin body. He carries the changes that puberty has brought to him, such as a quicker and stronger body, a tad bit of middle length black hair. He has deep, brown eyes that usually give off wolf stares at strangers. He usually prefers black clothing, which looks messy on him because of his forgery actions, seeing how he sometimes uses his clothes to clean his newest inventions he made out of whatever he had found. He has a rather goofy smile, with wide shoulders and a balanced body. He sometimes wears his pilot glasses, usually when he's out in cold weather.</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Personality:  </i></color></b> As many people describe him, Caspar is a rather confident person, usually messing around with his humor. He's usually good with lying, so he's not the quite innocent type. He has some dark view aspects of the world, a sadistic POV as he'd describe it himself. He usually looks at strangers from an objective aspect, not throwing them away, even if that means he doesn't trust them a hundred percent. Caspar would rather depend on mathematics and be a rational person, instead of letting his emotions take over.</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Backstory:  </i></color></b>32 AV. A baby crying could be heard inside of the tent, right after a scream of agony echoed in the distance. One person is holding a baby between a woman's legs, while another person is holding the woman's hand.</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">"It's a boy!"</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">The doctor of the village gave the baby to the woman's hands, which she smiled in grief and exhaustion.</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">"Caspar. your name will be Caspar."</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">And so was Caspar born. His uncle near his mother, who's holding her hand, smiles as well. </size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">"Don't worry Stella. We'll take good care of him."</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">There the baby cried. Cried into the new world he was opened to, in a middle ranged village of Mesalia. His big brown eyes looked innocent and young. He looked at his mother with curiosity, grabbing her finger. He looked rather intelligent but wasn't it too early to say this?</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">"I love you, and I love my baby."</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">The mother held his uncle's hand tightly, looking at the two loves of her life. One was her new forbidden lover after her husband died, and the other was her hope. Her symbol of innocence. The two parents grabbed the child together. They were filled with happiness. With years of having a forbidden marriage, someone would finally like them. Someone they could call their child, their legacy.</size><br />
And so has the child has been growing up with his uncle since then. Until the age of twelve, that is. In the workshop his uncle owned, he'd usually play around with tools, making new objects he'd call his "inventions". But working there had really seemed to improve his skill on crafting. But then the stranger came.<br />
"You do not understand madam.. your son. He's special. He's intelligent. He needs to be taught by better teachers!"<br />
"I do not care! He's my child, and you can't take him away from me!"<br />
His mother cried while the soldier stabbed her in the stomach. His uncle screamed with anger after the shock of losing his wife, and attacked the soldier, getting punched in the face to the ground again. Then the soldier took the little boy's hand, strongly dragging him towards the door of the workshop they called their house. Caspar was silently crying, hoping this would end. He didn't want to become a special person. He was happy at the spot he was in before. <br />
"I'm going to teach you."<br />
"Teach me?... How to kill?"<br />
The soldier kept dragging him towards the horse he came to the village by. Then they have traveled for two long days until they finally stopped at a cave. The boy was starving, he was tired, he wanted his mother.<br />
The cave was filled with tents, in which people lived. Some were filled with students his age, noting some stuff in front of a man that looked like a teacher.<br />
"Children like you are taken by us. We will teach you how to use your mind, via mathematics, and improve your crafting."<br />
"What is this place?..."<br />
"This is the cave we call home. Our men stay here."<br />
From that day, Caspar was thrown into a tent with a teacher that taught him about mathematics and numbers for years, as well like he learned how to craft better. At the age of fifteen, he was finally able to forge a weapon for himself. He named it Revenger, with the anger he carried from his past, and attacked the soldier that took him there. Killing him off guard, the other men were happy that another weak one was taken away from them. From that day, the child was also taught how to use his two feet tall steel sword. At the age of eighteen, finally old enough to leave the area. He was sent away with a big ceremony, traveling for days. Finally, he arrives at his old village, which he finds his uncle in. His uncle greets him with happiness, crying in tears to finally see his step-son. Then he tells Caspar about a stranger that people in the village seem obsessed with. Out of curiosity, he goes to speak with the strange man alone, and the man tells him about a strange place called Neighville. Caspar, depending on the legends he had heard about this earlier, he gets interested to see this place by his own eyes, so he makes a deal with the man to take him there. The man takes Caspar on a boat, and brings him to Neighville.<br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Capabilities: </i></color></b> Crafting and forgery (Advanced)</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">Sword fighting (Apprentice)</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">Mathematics (Competent)</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Items:  </i></color></b>Revenger, a two feet tall sword made out of steel with a metal handle. It's the only weapon Caspar has ever had.</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">A crafting hammer, it was given to him by his uncle when he visited him after he was trained.</size><br />
<size option="small" style="font-size:small">A belt that he uses as his tool shed.</size><br />
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<size option="small" style="font-size:small"><b><color option="#a3a3a2" style="color: #a3a3a2;"><i>Additional Comments:  </i></color></b> Please excuse my poor English and stupid grammar/spelling mistakes, I've learned English myself at home and I did not speak it as my home language. I really apologize if that backstory wasn't good enough because it was the best I could come up with using such a small words I knew. Thank you for giving attention to this, and have a good day!</size>

[Hutchy]

Hello, Cays. I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.

Alright, first things first, I need to see more relation to the servers lore, which can be found here.  Being 20, he'll have been born shortly before the Civil War ended. Make sure to make mention of these and following events in your character's backstory. Speaking of backstory, it needs to end with either your character arriving in or travelling to where the setting takes place. For ease of reference, it's a town called Nightveil.

Also, I'm not really sold on the idea that your character willingly got onto a boat going out to sea with a total stranger. Could we please get an explanation as to why he goes through with it? Otherwise, this will have to be changed.

That's all I can think of for you right now. Please post again in this thread when you've made your changes and we'll continue from there.

[Caystros]

"Alright, first things first, I need to see more relation to the servers lore, which can be found here. Being 20, he'll have been born shortly before the Civil War ended. Make sure to make mention of these and following events in your character's backstory. Speaking of backstory, it needs to end with either your character arriving in or travelling to where the setting takes place. For ease of reference, it's a town called Nightveil."

This part is copy and pasted from most of the forums, and my character fits all of these. Second, my character isn't 20, he's 18. Third, he was taken away by a rebellious group that was in between around ten or twenty men, many groups like these probably exists already and no one would be aware, seeing how they're not a real threat, just people believeing in their own way of doing things. My character does actually end up getting in a boat, and I'm very surprised you just copy pasted this part, not even bothering to read my backstory. I already mentioned when my character was born, and I honestly see no reason to add parts where he hears about the war. Living a life span of 18 years, he has obviously learnt about it.

The only part I see that needs to be fixed from your comments is why he'd get into the boat. I'll edit that. Other than that, I honestly don't see anything not fitting the explanation you gave to me.

[Hutchy]

There's no need to be rude. Believe me, I read every single application we get. I made the mistake on his age, yes, but the point still stands. It's copy-pasted because it's a mistake most new applicants make. It is a requirement that the Dusk Portal reopening and Civil War be mentioned in your application. You make no mention of either of these, obvious or not they're necessary.

[Hutchy]

Trashed due to inactivuty. Feel free to reapply.