11-10-2013, 06:16 PM
1. Grammar in bulletpoint lists are consistency-based. Basically, you can do whatever formatting you want, but it all needs to be consistent and parallel. Ours is not as consistent as it could be; 'Keep all conversation topics and language within the PG-13 guidelines.' This is a full sentence with a full stop, whereas all the other points are not. I would either change all the other points to full sentences, or simply make this sentence into:
'All conversation topics and language within the PG-13 guidelines'
2. There are 'RP's. For consistency with decisions made in the first thread, they should now be 'roleplay's.
3. 'No out-of-character fighting/heated arguing when others can hear'
I would change to 'when others are in range', because 'hear' is a bit weird in online chat.
4. 'Caps spamming' should be 'all caps spamming'. Just makes it clearer.
That's all I got.
'All conversation topics and language within the PG-13 guidelines'
2. There are 'RP's. For consistency with decisions made in the first thread, they should now be 'roleplay's.
3. 'No out-of-character fighting/heated arguing when others can hear'
I would change to 'when others are in range', because 'hear' is a bit weird in online chat.
4. 'Caps spamming' should be 'all caps spamming'. Just makes it clearer.
That's all I got.
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