Hi, Riv. Sorry for the wait; I had a few commitments today, namely Lunar New Year.
Anyway, your feedback:
1. “the seed of a warrior spirit Zarkaylia and Thomas planted” Please discuss this with Zark and Fire to ensure this is accurately supported by RP events, then revise accordingly.
2. Too many items. I recommend removing the pigments, as they’re the most unsupported by the return story. Please revise.
3. “Hair Color: Amber Red (Red) (Wavy-Curly) (Waist Length) … Skin Tone: Rosy Fair, Lightly Freckled” These don’t reflect the changes to your character. Please revise.
That’s all, for now. If anything’s unclear, feel free to ask questions. Good luck.
Anyway, your feedback:
1. “the seed of a warrior spirit Zarkaylia and Thomas planted” Please discuss this with Zark and Fire to ensure this is accurately supported by RP events, then revise accordingly.
2. Too many items. I recommend removing the pigments, as they’re the most unsupported by the return story. Please revise.
3. “Hair Color: Amber Red (Red) (Wavy-Curly) (Waist Length) … Skin Tone: Rosy Fair, Lightly Freckled” These don’t reflect the changes to your character. Please revise.
That’s all, for now. If anything’s unclear, feel free to ask questions. Good luck.
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