08-09-2014, 08:55 AM
Just a little bump to let you guys know I still would like some input! I'm still looking for that charmed little story.
Brew- "A Realm, awoken. A belief, shattered."
You have an interesting story to tell but the majority of what you have is the setting for which it happens. Not a lot of information as far as WHAT kind of conflict these characters face or how it really effects them. Just more so the environment, said setting also opens up more lore questions then I'm prepared to deal with at the moment.
I'd like to try to find a time period closer to the current for the setting so as to avoid lore points I may not know or want to resolve.
Thank you for contributing, I'd love to see what else you've got for me.
Young - "A Wet Flame"
Again this story doesn't provide a clear story arch for me to work off of. Luxits are another part of the lore I'd rather not poke, as it's sort of this wiggly gray mass we know can happen but have never seen.
Young- "A Sage"
This one has a conflict with established sage lore. So I can't use it ;^;. I don't know if I can explain it here so ask me in staff if you want to know.
Young- "Gold and Beer"
I like this one but it has a few problems we'd need to work out, for a short story it has a few too many characters, and again there isn't any clear plot of what their hijinks ultimately end up being, what trouble they find themselves in and how this effects their lives long-term.
Thank you for your input, i know you've more ideas so lets either work out some kinks in "Gold and Beer" Or hear some more (Both would be great!)
Rokku -"The Heist"
This is going to sound so terribly biased.
You have a story outline I can follow and a small enough cast to make it work, this is exactly the sort of story I'm looking for with the small problems being the setting, and having the main character hidden is quite challenging. I also hate the name Samual Richards.
I'm not entirely sold, Can you give me more ideas or start by changing his stupid name?
So thank you everyone who's contributed. I still would like some input if anyone has one. Even if the ideas lack clear plots like some of the ones given that doesn't mean a story can't be worked out. We can expand and develop ideas into the gem we want but the first step is throwing them out there so we can have a look. I know I'm being rather picky, but to be honest this is going to be months of work for me and if the story doesn't work then I will hit a wall and all those months will be for nothing.
Thank you again everyone, and I hope more of you have ideas to contribute!
Brew- "A Realm, awoken. A belief, shattered."
You have an interesting story to tell but the majority of what you have is the setting for which it happens. Not a lot of information as far as WHAT kind of conflict these characters face or how it really effects them. Just more so the environment, said setting also opens up more lore questions then I'm prepared to deal with at the moment.
I'd like to try to find a time period closer to the current for the setting so as to avoid lore points I may not know or want to resolve.
Thank you for contributing, I'd love to see what else you've got for me.
--*@*--
Young - "A Wet Flame"
Again this story doesn't provide a clear story arch for me to work off of. Luxits are another part of the lore I'd rather not poke, as it's sort of this wiggly gray mass we know can happen but have never seen.
Young- "A Sage"
This one has a conflict with established sage lore. So I can't use it ;^;. I don't know if I can explain it here so ask me in staff if you want to know.
Young- "Gold and Beer"
I like this one but it has a few problems we'd need to work out, for a short story it has a few too many characters, and again there isn't any clear plot of what their hijinks ultimately end up being, what trouble they find themselves in and how this effects their lives long-term.
Thank you for your input, i know you've more ideas so lets either work out some kinks in "Gold and Beer" Or hear some more (Both would be great!)
--*@*--
Rokku -"The Heist"
This is going to sound so terribly biased.
You have a story outline I can follow and a small enough cast to make it work, this is exactly the sort of story I'm looking for with the small problems being the setting, and having the main character hidden is quite challenging. I also hate the name Samual Richards.
I'm not entirely sold, Can you give me more ideas or start by changing his stupid name?
--*@*--
------------------------
So thank you everyone who's contributed. I still would like some input if anyone has one. Even if the ideas lack clear plots like some of the ones given that doesn't mean a story can't be worked out. We can expand and develop ideas into the gem we want but the first step is throwing them out there so we can have a look. I know I'm being rather picky, but to be honest this is going to be months of work for me and if the story doesn't work then I will hit a wall and all those months will be for nothing.
Thank you again everyone, and I hope more of you have ideas to contribute!