13-11-2018, 02:52 PM
Sorry for the wait, Slender. I'm back with your feedback.
I'd like to see your backstory connected more to the server's lore, because of the character's age you should concentrate on the Civil War and Dusk Portal reopening.
Brief note, I need you to remove any reference to magic and spells, as such things don't exist in the setting.
Skills-wise, I'll need you to assign a 'level' to each of the skills to help me judge the realism of the character. You can find a guide to help you do that here.
That's all I have for you for the moment. Bump this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue from there.
I'd like to see your backstory connected more to the server's lore, because of the character's age you should concentrate on the Civil War and Dusk Portal reopening.
Brief note, I need you to remove any reference to magic and spells, as such things don't exist in the setting.
Skills-wise, I'll need you to assign a 'level' to each of the skills to help me judge the realism of the character. You can find a guide to help you do that here.
That's all I have for you for the moment. Bump this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue from there.