16-07-2019, 02:35 PM
Alright, Kibble, sorry for the wait. Here's your feedback.
After my first look over, it looks like all I need to see you add is a mention of the Dusk Portal and the effect it had on Marc and people around him.
Bump this thread when you've made your edit and we'll continue from there. Bonus points for highlighting your edits in a different colour. =)
After my first look over, it looks like all I need to see you add is a mention of the Dusk Portal and the effect it had on Marc and people around him.
Bump this thread when you've made your edit and we'll continue from there. Bonus points for highlighting your edits in a different colour. =)