30-09-2019, 12:27 PM
Hey Yamushu, sorry for the wait. Here's some feedback for you.
The easy stuff first. From how you've formatted your skill section, it seems as if you've read or at least very accurately preempted our skill guide! What I need though is for you to clearly note which skills are at what level. Your ranking for hunting is perfectly in line with what we like to see (Hunting - Expert). In case you've not seen the guide, here's a link.
Second, your character's backstory is required to have ties to the server lore, found here. Specifically, we need mention of your character or their community's position in the Civil War and the Dusk Portal reopening. They seem to live quite a sheltered life, so to say that it went mostly unnoticed would naturally be acceptable, or they could have involvement in them as you like.
That's all I have for you right now. Bump this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue from there.
The easy stuff first. From how you've formatted your skill section, it seems as if you've read or at least very accurately preempted our skill guide! What I need though is for you to clearly note which skills are at what level. Your ranking for hunting is perfectly in line with what we like to see (Hunting - Expert). In case you've not seen the guide, here's a link.
Second, your character's backstory is required to have ties to the server lore, found here. Specifically, we need mention of your character or their community's position in the Civil War and the Dusk Portal reopening. They seem to live quite a sheltered life, so to say that it went mostly unnoticed would naturally be acceptable, or they could have involvement in them as you like.
That's all I have for you right now. Bump this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue from there.