Updated it. I 'grounded' the fight scene into more of reality, less fantasy. And I explained a bit why the women didn't care, though it does stand to be said again, these women were there for the expressed intent to get into noble family pants. It was one of the only ways you might be able to do your family some good as a woman in Atarsis.
Three Days Later.
Know its rude and all to double post.. but come on guys! I have a three day weekend! (Well, 2 days left in it now) And I'd like to get back to RPing a lot.
04-11-2013, 10:45 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-11-2013, 10:45 AM by Zarkaylia.)
We apologize for the wait, but most of us unfortunately do not have the amount of free time you have right now. Fire have not been seen for some days, likely he's busy with rehearsals.
I'll check with Michelle and see if she's had her last days of her first year in uni and thus have gone on holidays by now. No promises though, she did not state which date she'd be back.
Myself I have a second exam tomorrow, so no matter how much I wish this to be a feedback post for you I'm sorry to say I need to put my college studies as first priority as well.
Please have patience.
Alright, I'll just be sitting over here then.
04-11-2013, 04:38 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-11-2013, 04:39 PM by FireDog.)
Hey Ryu! Sorry for the wait, man. I've been busy with theatre rehearsals and the others have uni and such. So looking over your changes, I think you're good to go. Feel free to play this character and welcome back with something fresh.
Would you like this in character sheets? I can move it there.
