17-08-2014, 03:12 AM
Hello warrior, it's time for round two. But before we go into that, another player can play as another player's character's sibling if the two know have agreed to it, but the other player will have to create another app for that sibling.
So for round two, I'll give you just the two major points that I want you to fix. We can get into the smaller things after you've done them.
Skills: I have to ask you to read our skill guide once more. We are not only asking what the character can and cannot do, but how well he can do them, as supported by his backstory. Take note of the format and the skill levels we provide in the guide and edit accordingly.
The link to our skill guide is: http://www.mesalia.net/forum/showthread....40#pid2840
Lore: I still don't see any relations to the lore whatsoever. Remember that you have to have mention of certain events that have happened, and have to include certain characteristics that are unique to our setting. Such events include the Civil Wars, the reopening of the portal, and so on.
Please read the lore of our setting once again and edit your story accordingly.
The link to the lore of our setting is: http://www.mesalia.net/lore.html
That's the two things I want you to fix for now, bump the thread when you're done.
-=oOo=-
So for round two, I'll give you just the two major points that I want you to fix. We can get into the smaller things after you've done them.
Skills: I have to ask you to read our skill guide once more. We are not only asking what the character can and cannot do, but how well he can do them, as supported by his backstory. Take note of the format and the skill levels we provide in the guide and edit accordingly.
The link to our skill guide is: http://www.mesalia.net/forum/showthread....40#pid2840
Lore: I still don't see any relations to the lore whatsoever. Remember that you have to have mention of certain events that have happened, and have to include certain characteristics that are unique to our setting. Such events include the Civil Wars, the reopening of the portal, and so on.
Please read the lore of our setting once again and edit your story accordingly.
The link to the lore of our setting is: http://www.mesalia.net/lore.html
-=oOo=-
That's the two things I want you to fix for now, bump the thread when you're done.