[DawnoftheBobs]

I understand what your saying and agree with most of it, but as for the Xitian's being monsters that was just how he saw them, their personalities, and traits. Also i wasnt expecting any items to be given to me, I was just going to set one aside once i made one myself. Anyways, I am going to be busy with some work for a while and I will be thinking about this further on and I would find it much easier if i would just send in an application that I had time to revise, re-read, and get some peer review on. While I'm doing my work, I will be thinking about this and writing it, going back and checking, doing everything I simply did not bother to do with the past two. So if you don't mind delete this post and I will send in a infinitely better application sometime in the future.

P.S. Thank you for being strict and enforcing the lore, rules, ect. While still being helpful. Not enough MC RP servers do that anymore.