[Michelle]

Hello, and welcome to Mesalia. I’m Michelle and as you know, I’ll be reviewing your application. I understand you’re currently editing this, but here are a few important points which you may or may not be aware of for your next revision:

1. Please provide an IGN. This point will remain and you will not be accepted into the server until an IGN is provided, as your application is simply incomplete without one.
2. Please specify your character’s current age. This is required as full feedback cannot currently be given on the following topics without it: lore relation, skill realism and balancing.
3. An in-depth and detailed description of your character’s personality is required in your character’s backstory. Currently, there is insufficient depth and knowledge provided on this in your application. Please revise, ensuring that you are thorough and that your character’s backstory demonstrates the development of your character’s personality over time.
4. Your character’s backstory must end with your character arriving to the current RP setting alone. This means that the entire group that your character came with must a) not be there initially, or b) die before your character reaches the setting. Please revise. However, it seems you are planning on having your character arrive at the setting alongside other characters played by other player(s). If so, you must identify which player(s) you are planning this with (for verification purposes) and understand that your application will not be accepted until all members of your character’s party have been approved. The group itself may be denied; this is to ensure everyone here is inclusive and welcoming to all members with their RP as possible.
5. ‘Marine’ is considered to be a term that is too contemporary for Mesalia’s vaguely medieval timeframe. Please revise.

That’s all, for now. Thank you for waiting patiently and good luck.
I need sleep so bad.