[Amalia]

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In Game Name(IGN):
Amalia_

Why do you want to join?
Well I was looking for an RP server on Minecraft because I recently got back into minecraft Roleplay.

Do you have any RP'ing experience?
I have a lot of experience while playing on a roleplay server on World of Warcraft. (Not sure if you know...?)

Tell us a bit about yourself:
RP wise I don't mind character flirting but I'm strictly no relationship person myself. It makes me uncomfortable. Not RP wise I might not be putting myself forward in.. Anywhere really since I'm really shy so don't be surprised if you don't hear from me. Hehe...

IC~

Full Name:
Telli Whisperwind

Age:
17 Years

Race: Messalian? (Just send a PM on that!)

Basic Appearance: Long wavy brown hair, green eyes and often in a waist coat and shirt, shorts and high boots.

Your Character Biography:
A mother arched over her cloth wrapped baby weeps quietly, the sound of war sounded quietly in the background.
"She'll be okay." an older woman says, placing a hand on the mother's shoulder.
"I know she will." the mother declared. "Look after Telli, treat her well." the mother asked, facing the older woman who cracks a thin smile.
"I promise."

The loud shouts and playful cheers were deafening to Telli, who writhed in bed and cried. The young baby couldn't sleep while fighting sounded outside. "It's the midst of a civil war, what do you mean 'more taxes' we're probably about to evacuate anyways!" sounded an argument. Telli, too young to understand, disregarded the harsh words and attempted sleep.

Telli stumbled across the orphanage, gripping a toy in one hand and a bit of bread in the other, the orphanage bustled with energy.
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At fourteen she left the orphanage and took to training. So fresh from war finding training wasn't hard, she'd took to the bow and arrow faster than she had to the dagger but the arrow wouldn't save her in close combat. Three years later she finalized training and took to education. She, with what little money she'd managed from chores around the near area, had bought books on survival and basic education books and a few supplies. From then on she set up camp in small area's in practise of survival and worked on education.


Specify your character's skills:
In the way of fighting she uses a bow and arrow mainly but for certain situations she has taken to using a dagger. She learnt how to survive outside city walls and shops so knowledge of basic poisonous flora and fauna and basic knowledge of hunting, nothing extreme as she only spent around a year learning and practicing this.


Do your character bring anything to the setting (part from clothes)?:
Hardly. Perhaps, maybe, a bow and a quiver of arrows and her dagger.

Anything you'd like to add:

[Hutchy]

Hello, Amalia. I'm Hutchy, and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.

• Your backstory needs more detail and relation to the server lore, which can be found here. Lore relation helps us judge how well they character will fit into the setting, and the overall backstory lets us gauge if they are a believable character and, again, how they fit into the setting. I recommend that you take a look at previous, accepted applications and/or character sheets, a large list of examples can be found here, to help you get a better idea of how it should look and read.
  
  As a note, as of the 1st of April the Dusk Portal has only been open for two years. You will have to evaluate your character's age at the time.

• In addition, we need a more detailed path through the backstory, the character’s age at certain events being an example of this.

• Your character’s backstory doesn't do a lot to explain personal growth over her life. The backstory needs to show more description of how she was as a child, how she was through adolescence and then into adulthood. It is necessary that we see how the character has changed over the years before arriving in the setting. Please work on this.
  Additionally, the personality section could do with some fleshing out. This lets us know that you know the character. When you add further detail to the backstory, it can help you accomplish this.

• Your character’s skills seem to be quite limited, and it’s current layout makes it difficult to understand the ‘level’ of his skills. I recommend that you read this guide and evaluate the layout of this section.

• Finally, your character's backstory must conclude with their arrival in the Forbidden Lands, where the RP setting is located.

That's all for now, please bump the thread when you're done and we'll continue from there.

P.S, As a favour, please drop the central alignment of the application. Can't explain why but it gets difficult to read after a short while. Thanks.

[Amalia]

I'll try my best - I'm not very good at Backstory creation and about relation to lore I find lore... Difficult to read? I mean I don't do very well remembering everything that happened. I'll try my best but it may be below standard..

[Hutchy]

Just do what you can, I'm here to help if you have questions.

[SentaiPink]

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